When receiving our feedback, we got told our script wasn't long enough. They also commented on the fact that it was too early on in our film opening and people might miss it and our dialogue is essential for our film opening and without it, the film would be quite confusing with it. We re recorded it and made it slower and put it further on in the film.
Previously our script was:
'The doctor said brain activity should be maintained, he said looking
at old pictures and going through my everyday routine would help'.
Our voice over is now:
I'm on my way
back from the neurology unit at the specialist hospital in London. There
was only a single thought running through my head that afternoon. The
doctors that brain activity should be maintained. He said that looking
through old pictures and going through my everyday routine would help.
This was my first therapy to help with the retrieval of my memory and i
was determined to make it work'
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