Feedback

We received the following feedback for our first draft from Miss Brookes:

- She liked our lift shot.
- The way we presented our titles were good, especially the one that gets wiped away by a train.

The feedback she gave us to improve on for our final draft was:
 - The black flashing effect is good but we used it too much and it created the impression of something bad is going to happen and that it gets annoying after a while.
- The shot of Libby walking across the platform is too wobbly and that we need to find a way to make it still otherwise it will lose us marks.
- Some shots that she liked should be enlongated like the shot of libby sitting on the train.
- We need to include still scrapbook shots to fill more time and to also present the significance of it in our film.
- The effect on the tea cups is too dark so we need to adjust the brightness and saturation of it.
- The film title needs to be earlier on in our film as only trailers have the title at the end.
- We need to make our film longer as it needs to be a minimum of 2 minutes.
- The voiceover came in to early, people might miss out on it and then be confused what the film is about.

When editing for our final draft we will take our feedback into consideration and hopefully improve on all of these things to ensure our film opening is up to a good standard.